Hej Henrik, flot arbejde, tillykke! I particularly like the use of windows inside the view to explain what is going on, very nice.
Speculating on why there are no comments or replies here I suspect it is because you are describing basic flight maneouvers, and most sim pilots here would not need to review these. To attract this audience, try posting a video on an advanced combat tactic, or focus on manouvers which are best suited to specific aircraft types: how to boom n zoom in the 109, how not to completely bleed off your energy in P40 turning fight etc.
Venlig hilsen!
H