If I remember the beginning correctly (I don't reread it to make a genuine bet), I'd say 2/ is plausible, however I wish Bondy makes it (I know Perri and Dave won't), so I still hope 2/ may be altered.1 /, 3/ and 4/ are then out of hte loop, 5/ stays a possibility. Now, If I was the author tickling my readers, I'd choose 5/ of course. So 5/ is my choice, but I'm still sad for Perri and Dave, hope I misread the beginning.

The berzerk action needs rewriting imho, doesn't read as believable now from my POV. Not trying to calculate, just isn't convincing yet.

Still another great chapter, thanks a lot smile


Last edited by rollnloop.; 02/24/18 02:33 PM.