Originally Posted by rollnloop.
I say just keep the story as it is, it’s really going well, and use ssnake to proocheck your next seehearspeak

Originally Posted by Nixer
Awesome stuff.

Originally Posted by Ssnake
Like you said, critical questions are (hopefully) useful to make the story even better.

Thanks for engaging all! Will keep pounding away on the keyboard ... am keeping the flow a few chapters ahead of what I’m posting, going back to proofread and then putting a chapter online so progress is solid. I’m thinking it will bottom out around 150K - 180K words but then I’ll be asking you what I can cut because I am a great believer in Elmore Leonard’s maxim ‘cut the parts people won’t want to read’! The good news Ssnake is that a lot of your very good observations are already covered in the plot as I have written it but I won’t say more because, spoilers!

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