Hi tflash
I've posted a response on YouTube, but there are a couple of other basic film-making "laws" you'll find helpful with your next epic:
1. Try to cut to the beat, or at least the theme, of the music
2. Adjust the pace of your cutting to the pace of the action
3. Observe directional continuity - this means that if the good guys take off from left to right, the bad guys have to take off from right to left. And every subsequent appearance of good guy/bad guy has to follow that rule, otherwise your viewer can't tell friend from foe. There are ways of getting around this - just Google "film-making crossing the line" and you should get loads of help
Hope this is helpful - I love LOMAC too!